[Sidrops] Andrew Alston's Discuss on draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-13: (with DISCUSS)

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DISCUSS:
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Thanks for the solid work on this document, for the most part, I found it clear
and easy to parse.

In Section 1, I see the following:

 Each ROA contains a set of IP prefixes, and an AS number of
   an AS authorized to originate all the IP prefixes in the set
   [RFC6482].

While I have some idea of what this means - it's confusing and I believe will
cause confusion on the part of other readers.  It's confusing to the point
where I'm not even sure exactly what the wording should be, but reading that,
an AS number of an AS doesn't seem right at all.

Let's discuss and see if we can find a way to come to text on this section that
is less confusing.

Thanks

Andrew