Re: [Sidrops] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-cms-signing-time-06: (with COMMENT)

Job Snijders <job@fastly.com> Tue, 16 April 2024 15:32 UTC

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Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2024 17:31:44 +0200
From: Job Snijders <job@fastly.com>
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-cms-signing-time-06: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Mahesh,

On Sun, Apr 14, 2024 at 07:52:48PM -0700, Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker wrote:
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> COMMENT:
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> I also noticed that the Introduction and the Abstract were exact copies of each
> other. Could the Abstract be an abstract?

Thank you for your review and suggestion!

I've made some changes to the file in my edit buffer, please see here:
https://github.com/job/draft-sidrops-cms-signing-time/commit/38cfc6fb6459834b1e2c461905842c661d2a1b4a

Does this work for you?

Kind regards,

Job