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Re: [Sidrops] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-cms-signing-time-06: (with COMMENT)

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Tue, 16 April 2024 16:00 UTC

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From: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 16 Apr 2024 08:59:59 -0700
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] Mahesh Jethanandani's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidrops-cms-signing-time-06: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Job,

This update addresses my comment. Thanks.

> On Apr 16, 2024, at 8:31 AM, Job Snijders <job@fastly.com> wrote:
> 
> Dear Mahesh,
> 
> On Sun, Apr 14, 2024 at 07:52:48PM -0700, Mahesh Jethanandani via Datatracker wrote:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> I also noticed that the Introduction and the Abstract were exact copies of each
>> other. Could the Abstract be an abstract?
> 
> Thank you for your review and suggestion!
> 
> I've made some changes to the file in my edit buffer, please see here:
> https://github.com/job/draft-sidrops-cms-signing-time/commit/38cfc6fb6459834b1e2c461905842c661d2a1b4a
> 
> Does this work for you?
> 
> Kind regards,
> 
> Job


Mahesh Jethanandani
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