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Re: [Sidrops] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidrops-rtr-keying - ENDS: 10/31/2018 (halloscream!)

Christopher Morrow <christopher.morrow@gmail.com> Tue, 06 November 2018 03:06 UTC

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From: Christopher Morrow <christopher.morrow@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 06 Nov 2018 14:06:26 +1100
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Subject: Re: [Sidrops] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidrops-rtr-keying - ENDS: 10/31/2018 (halloscream!)
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On Tue, Nov 6, 2018 at 3:43 AM Sriram, Kotikalapudi (Fed) <
kotikalapudi.sriram@nist.gov> wrote:

> Sorry for the delay. I have read the document and support moving it
> forward.
>
> I have the following editorial suggestions:
>
> (1) Shouldn’t RFC8205 be a normative reference?
>
> (2) s/[RFC8205] describes gritty details/[RFC8205] describes the BGPsec
> protocol/
>
> (3) The following substitution:
>
> Old (at the top of p.5):
> Therefore,
>    the operator transmits the AS it has chosen or the router and the BGP
>    Identifier as well when it sends the CSR to the CA.
>
> New:
> Therefore,
>    the operator includes the chosen AS number and the BGP
>    Identifier when it sends the CSR to the CA.
>
> The above sentence appears three times on p.5. So,please make them at
> least consistent with each other.
>
> Thank you.
> Sriram
>
>
thanks! these seem like sane changes... which we can drop in  edit-buffer
for revision post-iesg discussion, I think?

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