Re: [Sidrops] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidrops-https-tal-03 - ENDS 22 June 2018

[Job Snijders <[e-mail]>]

On Fri, Jun 08, 2018 at 09:45:10AM -0400, Chris Morrow wrote:
> The authors of: draft-ietf-sidrops-https-tal-03 would like the WG to
> consider a WGLC of their document, abstract:
> 
>   "This document defines a Trust Anchor Locator (TAL) for the Resource
>    Public Key Infrastructure (RPKI).  This document obsoletes RFC 7730
>    by adding support for HTTPS URIs in a TAL."
> 
> Please have a read through the document and send along
> comments/questions/additions/subtractions so the authors can amend if
> required with the intent to move this document along the proper path
> in short order.

Read. I support publication.

Nits:

1/ "one of more" should perhaps be "one or more"?

2/  OLD: "However, a MITM can perform withhold or replay attacks
targeting a Relying Party and keep the Relying Party from learning about
an update CA certificate."

PERHAPS: "However, a MITM attack can be performed to prevent the Relying
Party from learning about an updated CA certificate."

Kind regards,

Job