Re: [sipcore] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push-21: (with COMMENT) - the pull request commit

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Thu, 10 January 2019 14:49 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [sipcore] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push-21: (with COMMENT) - the pull request commit
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Subject: Re: [sipcore] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-push-21: (with COMMENT) - the pull request commit
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Hi,


Based on Mirja's COMMENTs, I have updated the pull request used for the review changes.


The commit can be found at:


https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-sip-push/pull/31/commits/09b15c74b76091d0f7e56edd5fa31c90ee4daafe



Note that the following change was also requested by another reviewer, and will be fixed in the commit associated with that review:


"maybe s/response Section 8.1/response (see Section 8.1)/"



Regards,


Christer