RE: WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-smime-cms-seed-00.txt

["Jongwook Park" <[e-mail]>]

Akihiro,

Thanks for your feedback.

Fully agree. I see no problem with your views on this draft.

1. Mistyped notation, Pi and Ci, through in Section 3 is fixed. (e.g.:
P1->P[1], C1->C[1])
2. Fixed
3. A[t] and R[t][i] containing the index 't' were replaced by A[s] and
R[s][i] separately.  
4. 05 00 representing the value NULL is appended.

Best regards, 
Park. 

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Park

I have four comments.

1. Section 3. Although array is defined as using [], there are parts
described
   without using []. 

2. Section 3. Definition of R. The expression R[t][i] is better.

3. Section 3.2 "SEED Key Wrap" step 3), t is not well defined(t will
   surely be s).

4. "0500" should be added to the last of the SMIMECapabilities.

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- KATO Akihiro