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Re: WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-smime-cms-seed-00.txt

KATO Akihiro <akato@po.ntts.co.jp> Tue, 13 April 2004 08:04 UTC

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From: KATO Akihiro <akato@po.ntts.co.jp>
To: ietf-smime@imc.org
Subject: Re: WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-smime-cms-seed-00.txt
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Park

I have four comments.

1. Section 3. Although array is defined as using [], there are parts described
   without using []. 

2. Section 3. Definition of R. The expression R[t][i] is better.

3. Section 3.2 "SEED Key Wrap" step 3), t is not well defined(t will
   surely be s).

4. "0500" should be added to the last of the SMIMECapabilities.

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- KATO Akihiro

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