[Softwires] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7599 (8063)

Greg Shepherd <gjshep@gmail.com> Wed, 07 August 2024 18:43 UTC

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Date: Wed, 07 Aug 2024 11:43:17 -0700
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Subject: [Softwires] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7599 (8063)
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I think most everyone is far away.. :) This looks straight forward.

On Wed, Aug 7, 2024 at 11:35 AM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke=
40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Any taker on this erratum ? I was only following softwire WG from far
> away...
>
>
>
> -éric
>
>
>
> *From: *RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> *Date: *Friday, 2 August 2024 at 19:56
> *To: *rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> *Cc: *dsfreemire@freemire.net <dsfreemire@freemire.net>,
> congxiao@cernet.edu.cn <congxiao@cernet.edu.cn>, Wojciech Dec (wdec) <
> wdec@cisco.com>, ot@cisco.com <ot@cisco.com>,
> satoru.matsushima@g.softbank.co.jp <satoru.matsushima@g.softbank.co.jp>,
> tetsuya@ipinfusion.com <tetsuya@ipinfusion.com>, softwires@ietf.org <
> softwires@ietf.org>
> *Subject: *[Softwires] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7599 (8063)
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7599,
> "Mapping of Address and Port using Translation (MAP-T)".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8063
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Scott Freemire <dsfreemire@freemire.net>
>
> Section: 5
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> The MAP-T algorithmic mapping rules are identical to those in
> Section 5(link #1) of the MAP-E specification [RFC7597](link #2), with the
> following
> exception: the forwarding of traffic to and from IPv4 destinations
> outside a MAP-T domain is to be performed as described in this
> document, instead of Section 5.4(link #3) of the MAP-E specification.
>
> link #1: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7599#section-5
> link #2: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597
> link #3: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7599#section-5.4
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> The MAP-T algorithmic mapping rules are identical to those in
> Section 5(link #1) of the MAP-E specification [RFC7597](link #2), with the
> following
> exception: the forwarding of traffic to and from IPv4 destinations
> outside a MAP-T domain is to be performed as described in this
> document, instead of Section 5.4(link #3) of the MAP-E specification.
>
> link #1: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597#section-5
> link #2: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597
> link #3: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc7597#section-5.4
>
> Notes
> -----
> The text in section 5 is correct, but 2 of the URL links are incorrect.
> All links in section 5 should point to RFC7597.
>
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". (If it is spam, it
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>
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7599 (draft-ietf-softwire-map-t-08)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Mapping of Address and Port using Translation (MAP-T)
> Publication Date    : July 2015
> Author(s)           : X. Li, C. Bao, W. Dec, Ed., O. Troan, S. Matsushima,
> T. Murakami
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Softwires
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>
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