[Softwires] Further draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast

ianfarrer@gmx.com Wed, 13 June 2018 08:26 UTC

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Subject: [Softwires] Further draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast
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Hi Authors,

I’m currently in the process of doing the write up for the draft. Please can you tell me if there are there any implementations in existence?

Also, I have run v21 through ID-Nits. The important output is below. For the downref, to RFC4925, does this need to be a normative reference?

Please can you address these points and submit an updated version.

Thanks,
Ian


  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

     (See RFCs 3967 and 4897 for information about using normative references
     to lower-maturity documents in RFCs)

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4291' is defined on line 677, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC4301' is defined on line 681, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  == Unused Reference: 'RFC7371' is defined on line 732, but no explicit
     reference was found in the text

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 4925