IETF Logo Mail Archive

Re: [Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: (with COMMENT)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Thu, 24 May 2018 04:56 UTC

Return-Path: <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
X-Original-To: softwires@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: softwires@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 912CE1200B9; Wed, 23 May 2018 21:56:03 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.599
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.599 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001, UNPARSEABLE_RELAY=0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id u0P6e05r1wbs; Wed, 23 May 2018 21:56:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from orange.com (mta136.mail.business.static.orange.com [80.12.70.36]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher AECDH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 90BB41204DA; Wed, 23 May 2018 21:56:01 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from opfednr06.francetelecom.fr (unknown [xx.xx.xx.70]) by opfednr23.francetelecom.fr (ESMTP service) with ESMTP id D6BEFC0598; Thu, 24 May 2018 06:55:59 +0200 (CEST)
Received: from Exchangemail-eme2.itn.ftgroup (unknown [xx.xx.31.58]) by opfednr06.francetelecom.fr (ESMTP service) with ESMTP id A0A811A0073; Thu, 24 May 2018 06:55:59 +0200 (CEST)
Received: from OPEXCLILMA3.corporate.adroot.infra.ftgroup ([fe80::60a9:abc3:86e6:2541]) by OPEXCLILM33.corporate.adroot.infra.ftgroup ([fe80::3881:fc15:b4b2:9017%19]) with mapi id 14.03.0389.001; Thu, 24 May 2018 06:55:59 +0200
From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org>, Ian Farrer <ianfarrer@gmx.com>, "softwire-chairs@ietf.org" <softwire-chairs@ietf.org>, "ianfarrer@gmx.com" <ianfarrer@gmx.com>, "softwires@ietf.org" <softwires@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: (with COMMENT)
Thread-Index: AQHT8roD8ktbXlJ4f0CVM5TZV4kgC6Q+Tg8A
Date: Thu, 24 May 2018 04:55:58 +0000
Message-ID: <787AE7BB302AE849A7480A190F8B93302DF1F470@OPEXCLILMA3.corporate.adroot.infra.ftgroup>
References: <152709587303.26838.5050589912062544169.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
In-Reply-To: <152709587303.26838.5050589912062544169.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
Accept-Language: fr-FR, en-US
Content-Language: fr-FR
X-MS-Has-Attach:
X-MS-TNEF-Correlator:
x-originating-ip: [10.168.234.4]
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64
MIME-Version: 1.0
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/softwires/MEdKQCTzKvpTRUhRd868BG4A-vA>
Subject: Re: [Softwires] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: (with COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: softwires@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: softwires wg discussion list <softwires.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/softwires>, <mailto:softwires-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/softwires/>
List-Post: <mailto:softwires@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:softwires-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires>, <mailto:softwires-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 24 May 2018 04:56:04 -0000

Hi Ben, 

Thank you. 

I updated the editorial note to make clear this is about changes into the document. 

I also updated the document to take into account the comments from: Mirja, Benjamin, and Adam.

An updated version with the changes is available online

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com]
> Envoyé : mercredi 23 mai 2018 19:18
> À : The IESG
> Cc : draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang@ietf.org; Ian Farrer; softwire-
> chairs@ietf.org; ianfarrer@gmx.com; softwires@ietf.org
> Objet : Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15:
> (with COMMENT)
> 
> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang-15: No Objection
> 
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> introductory paragraph, however.)
> 
> 
> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> 
> 
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-yang/
> 
> 
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> This is well-written overall, but I was confused by the RFC editor note after
> the abstract. I assume you mean for these updates to be done on matching text
> throughout the document, but I originally read it to mean update the text in
> the note itself, which is labeled for deletion.
>

v2.23.0 | Report a Bug | By Email