Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt

Jacob Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org> Tue, 04 December 2018 21:53 UTC

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Subject: Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt
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Thanks Corey! I've updated my working copy on GitHub, but I'll wait a 
little while before publishing a fresh draft in case more feedback comes 
in soon.

On 12/4/18 3:44 AM, Corey Bonnell wrote:
> Hi Jacob,
> Minor typo in section Section 8: “In
>    particular, it specifies that parameters are separated with 
> hyphens“. “Hyphens” should be replaced with “semicolons”.
>
> Thanks,
> Corey
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> *From:* Spasm <spasm-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Jacob 
> Hoffman-Andrews <jsha@eff.org>
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> *Subject:* Re: [lamps] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc6844bis-04.txt
> Changes in draft-04 vs draft-03:
>
> Addresseshttps://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid4062
>
>  - Updated the canonical presentation format for the value field to
> indicate that it's not length-limited.
>
> Addresses 
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>  - Fixed the example zones to make example.com absolute (ends in .)
>
> Removes "Certification Authority Restriction Flags" subsection under
> "IANA Considerations." Now "IANA Considerations just reads:
>
> IANA is requested to add [[[ RFC Editor: Please replace with this RFC 
> ]]] as
> a reference for the Certification Authority Restriction Flags and
> Certification Authority Restriction Properties registries.
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> Adds Corey Bonnell and Tim Hollebeek to Acknowledgements.
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