[lamps] AD Review: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7299-update-00

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Thu, 02 September 2021 20:22 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: [lamps] AD Review: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7299-update-00
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Hi!

I did an AD review of draft-ietf-lamps-rfc7299-update-00.  Thanks for this maintenance on the registries.  I have no substantive comments and will advance the document to IETF LC.

One editorial nit to address with other IETF LC feedback from idnits:

  -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7299, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to directly say this.

Regards,
Roman