Re: [lamps] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail-05: (with COMMENT)

[Corey Bonnell <[e-mail]>]

Hi Éric,
Thank you for your review. I have pushed a commit to the Github repository for the document that I believe addresses your nit: https://github.com/CBonnell/caa-issuemail/commit/7de258428ba72b305ddcc71c17eacb25cef75008.

I will incorporate this change when I publish a new version of the draft to the Datatracker sometime later this week.

Thanks,
Corey

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail-05

Thank you for the work put into this document. The examples of section 5 are
useful for the reader.

Please find below one nit.

Special thanks to Russ Housley for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus *but it lacks*  the justification of the intended status.

Please note that Tim Wicinski  is the DNS directorate reviewer and you may want
to consider this int-dir review as well when it will be available (no need to
wait for it though):
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-caa-issuemail/reviewrequest/17830/
(and I have noted the interaction between the author and Tim for his Last Call
DNSDIR review)

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

# NITS

## Section 3

"LDH", even if defined in the RFC editor abbreviation, would benefit from an
expansion in the text.



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