[lamps] draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04 ietf last call Genart review

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 03 June 2025 11:07 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa
Title: Use of the ML-DSA Signature Algorithm in the Cryptographic Message
Syntax (CMS) Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-04
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2025-06-03
IETF LC End Date: 2025-06-05
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:A well written document with just one editorial comment concerning
non-ascii characters in the text version.

I did not check the technical details in appendix A or appendix B

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:

The text contains non-ascii characters something that NITS calls out. I am not
sure if policy has changed but I did not think that non-ASCII was permitted in
the text version of an RFC.

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