Re: [lamps] [EXTERNAL] [IANA #1261900] expert review for draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile (cmp)

["Brockhaus, Hendrik" <[e-mail]>]

John

Thank you for your review and for spotting this issue!

I will submit an updated version of the draft implementing the following change to Section 6.1:
OLD
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get CA Certificates        |     getcacerts     | Section |
   |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get Root CA Certificate    |   getrootupdate    | Section |
   | Update                     |                    | 4.3.2   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get CA Certificates        | getcertreqtemplate | Section |
   |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
NEW
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get CA Certificates        |     getcacerts     | Section |
   |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get Root CA Certificate    |   getrootupdate    | Section |
   | Update                     |                    | 4.3.2   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
   | Get Certificate Request    | getcertreqtemplate | Section |
   | Template                   |                    | 4.3.3   |
   +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+

Checking Section 8 on this copy-past error I also need to do the following change:
OLD
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getcacerts         | Get CA Certificates over HTTP | [thisRFC] |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getrootupdate      | Get Root CA Certificate       | [thisRFC] |
   |                    | Update over HTTP              |           |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getcertreqtemplate | Get CA Certificates over HTTP | [thisRFC] |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+

NEW
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getcacerts         | Get CA Certificates over HTTP | [thisRFC] |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getrootupdate      | Get Root CA Certificate       | [thisRFC] |
   |                    | Update over HTTP              |           |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+
   | getcertreqtemplate | Get Certificate Request       | [thisRFC] |
   |                    | Template over HTTP            |           |
   +--------------------+-------------------------------+-----------+

Hendrik

> Von: John Gray <[e-mail]>
> 
> I have reviewed the document for the Well-Known URI Path Segments for this
> document:
> https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatrac
> ker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-
> profile%2F&data=05%7C01%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C41ce076
> 027b4414a02c908daf4bc874e%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1
> %7C0%7C638091387813068445%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4
> wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C
> %7C%7C&sdata=PIfIQWfdyftptEnhOPkIjJhfhrje7F%2BUSU%2FJqkd3B1s%3D&res
> erved=0.   I think there is an issue in section 6.1 that looks like a copy/paste type
> of error:
> 
> Snippet from table 1 in section 6.1 (page 79):
> 
> +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get CA Certificates        |     getcacerts     | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get Root CA Certificate    |   getrootupdate    | Section |
>    | Update                     |                    | 4.3.2   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get CA Certificates        | getcertreqtemplate | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | CRL Update Retrieval       |      getcrls       | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.4   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
> 
> The "Get CA Certificates" PKI Management Operation is listed twice.   The
> second time it refers to the same section 4.3.1.   The path Segment says
> "getcertreqtemplate".    I compared it to the CoAP Transfer from table 2 in
> section 6.2, and section 6.2 seems correct and it contains a PKI Management
> Operation of "Get Certificate Request Template" which is what I think was
> meant in section 6.1.
> 
> From Table 2 section 6.2 (page 82) - Notice no duplicate and reference to 4.3.3
> +---------------------------------------+---------+---------+
>    | Get CA Certificates                   |   crts  | Section |
>    |                                       |         | 4.3.1   |
>    +---------------------------------------+---------+---------+
>    | Get Root CA Certificate Update        |   rcu   | Section |
>    |                                       |         | 4.3.2   |
>    +---------------------------------------+---------+---------+
>    | Get Certificate Request Template      |   att   | Section |
>    |                                       |         | 4.3.3   |
>    +---------------------------------------+---------+---------+
>    | CRL Update Retrieval                  |   crls  | Section |
>    |                                       |         | 4.3.4   |
>    +---------------------------------------+---------+---------+
> 
> 
> So I think section 6.1 needs to be updated as follows:
> 
> +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get CA Certificates        |     getcacerts     | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.1   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get Root CA Certificate    |   getrootupdate    | Section |
>    | Update                     |                    | 4.3.2   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | Get Certificate Request Template        | getcertreqtemplate | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.3   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
>    | CRL Update Retrieval       |      getcrls       | Section |
>    |                            |                    | 4.3.4   |
>    +----------------------------+--------------------+---------+
> 
> The rest of it looks correct to me.
> 
> 
> Is this all I need to do for this review, or is there something more official
> needed?
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> 
> John Gray
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: John Gray
> Sent: Wednesday, January 11, 2023 4:29 PM
> To: [e-mail]
> Subject: RE: [EXTERNAL] [IANA #1261900] expert review for draft-ietf-lamps-
> lightweight-cmp-profile (cmp)
> 
> Hi Sabrina,
> 
> Its on my list of items to complete.  I know January 12th (tomorrow) is the
> deadline.   I've just been in meetings all day so this is a task I'm hoping to
> complete by tomorrow.
> 
> Thanks for pinging me about it...   😊
> 
> John Gray
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sabrina Tanamal via RT <[e-mail]>
> Sent: Wednesday, January 11, 2023 4:26 PM
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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [IANA #1261900] expert review for draft-ietf-lamps-
> lightweight-cmp-profile (cmp)
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> Hi John (cc: lamps wg),
> 
> Have you had a chance to review this request?
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Sabrina Tanamal
> Lead IANA Services Specialist
> 
> On Fri Dec 30 00:50:09 2022, sabrina.tanamal wrote:
> > Dear John (cc: lamps wg),
> >
> > As the designated expert for the CMP Well-Known URI Path Segments
> > registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-
> > lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile for us? Please see
> >
> >
> https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefens
> e.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-
> iet&data=05%7C01%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C41ce076027b44
> 14a02c908daf4bc874e%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0%7
> C638091387813068445%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwM
> DAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7C
> &sdata=aKORn2CLqa6QS6%2FgjLxF6a2Pcc9ij6v7l5yPhYWCCIA%3D&reserved=0
> > f-lamps-lightweight-cmp-__;!!FJ-Y8qCqXTj2!YtpBnAjGOOsCPP5j6YbYViNYTYry
> > HrTqrfOTBYNCw2PXGvz8_A9IxOZWYMyJxbES1-lNecAAd0NIY-btTtQ0T0xTPrc$
> > profile/
> >
> > The due date is January 12th.
> >
> > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
> > we'll make the registration at
> >
> >
> https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefens
> e.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fcmp__%
> 3B!!F&data=05%7C01%7Chendrik.brockhaus%40siemens.com%7C41ce076027b
> 4414a02c908daf4bc874e%7C38ae3bcd95794fd4addab42e1495d55a%7C1%7C0
> %7C638091387813068445%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAw
> MDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000%7C%7C%7
> C&sdata=J0FQz2czi6A%2Bag9xX04qbJ7rHdK0Qz%2FOzftjA2g19K4%3D&reserved
> =0
> > J-
> Y8qCqXTj2!YtpBnAjGOOsCPP5j6YbYViNYTYryHrTqrfOTBYNCw2PXGvz8_A9IxOZW
> YM
> > yJxbES1-lNecAAd0NIY-btTtQ05lM5cLo$
> >
> > Hendrik Brockhaus and David von Oheimb are also experts for this
> > registry, but they're the authors of this document.
> >
> > Thank you,
> >
> > Sabrina Tanamal
> > Lead IANA Services Specialist
> 
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