[Stox] review of -im (was: Re: Reminder WGLC on -im and -chat)

Philipp Hancke <fippo@goodadvice.pages.de> Sun, 08 December 2013 11:38 UTC

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Subject: [Stox] review of -im (was: Re: Reminder WGLC on -im and -chat)
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Am 04.12.2013 14:17, schrieb Yana Stamcheva:
> This is a reminder for the WGLC on:
> draft-ietf-stox-im-05 : http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stox-im-05
> draft-ietf-stox-chat-03 : http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-stox-chat-03
> Less than a week left until the deadline December 9, 2013.
> If you've reviewed the documents, please don't forget to send a note to the list with any remaining issues you may have found or just that you find the documents complete.

Looking good to me, even though I think that numbering the examples 
would be highly appreciated by readers.

table 1: might be worth mentioning that type has no mapping since we're 
only dealing with single instant messages for which this is not set.

table 2: Request-URI or To can map to 'to', right?