Re: [straw] I-D Action: draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-02.txt

["Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Christer, All,
I have checked through the -02 version and I found a few small things:

[line 193 - 195, clause 3. 3. The SIP Traceroute Mechanism]
Says "The originating UAC can then generate another INVITE to the same target AoR with a Max-Forwards header field value of 1, which will reach the second SIP, and so on."
Some text is missing here. I guess that a Max-Forwards of 1 will reach the next SIP entity that decrements Max-Forwards, which could be a proxy or B2BUA.

[line 205]
"Enterprise and a Service Provider across a SIP Trunk" should be lower case: "enterprise and a service provider across a SIP trunk"

[line 225]
Contains a reference to [draft-loop-detection]. I don't know if this is a problem but how is the link to a draft in progress kept valid if the draft becomes an RFC?

Regards,
Peter


From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg at ericsson.com> 
To: Hadriel Kaplan <hadriel.kaplan at oracle.com>, "straw at ietf.org" <straw at ietf.org> 
Date: Tue, 11 Mar 2014 17:45:35 +0000 
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Excellent! Thank you, Hadriel!

Peter, could you please indicate whether you are ok with the -02 version? Thanks!

Regards,

Christer

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From: straw [straw-bounces at ietf.org] on behalf of Hadriel Kaplan [hadriel.kaplan at oracle.com]
Sent: Tuesday, 11 March 2014 6:41 PM
To: straw at ietf.org
Subject: Re: [straw] I-D Action: draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-02.txt

FYI - this has the changes from the previous comments/discussions, and is hopefully complete/final.
Let me know if I missed something.

-hadriel


On Mar 11, 2014, at 12:39 PM, internet-drafts at ietf.org wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Sip Traversal Required for Applications to Work Working Group of the IETF.
>
>        Title           : A Media-based Traceroute Function for the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP)
>        Author          : Hadriel Kaplan
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-02.txt
>       Pages           : 6
>       Date            : 2014-03-11
>
> Abstract:
>   SIP already provides the ability to perform hop-by-hop traceroute
>   for SIP messages using the Max-Forwards header field, in order to
>   determine the reachability path of requests to a target.  A
>   mechanism for media-loopback calls has also been defined separately,
>   which enables test calls to be generated which result in media being
>   looped back to the originator.  This document describes a means of
>   performing hop-by-hop traceroute-style test calls using the media-
>   loopback mechanism, in order to test the media path when SIP
>   sessions go through media-relaying B2BUAs.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-straw-sip-traceroute-02
>
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>
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