Re: [Suit] Is draft-ietf-suit-manifest-07 ready for WGLC?

"Waltermire, David A. (Fed)" <david.waltermire@nist.gov> Tue, 23 June 2020 16:30 UTC

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From: "Waltermire, David A. (Fed)" <david.waltermire@nist.gov>
To: Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com>, suit <suit@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Suit] Is draft-ietf-suit-manifest-07 ready for WGLC?
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Hannes,

Do you plan to provide an update with more examples before the IETF meeting?

Dave

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From: Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com> 
Sent: Tuesday, June 9, 2020 2:23 PM
To: Waltermire, David A. (Fed) <david.waltermire@nist.gov>ov>; suit <suit@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Is draft-ietf-suit-manifest-07 ready for WGLC?

Hi David,

the last few draft updates have focused on improving readability. I also believe we need more examples and that's something I will focus on next.
The upcoming hackathon might also help to provide further input.

Ciao
Hannes

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From: Waltermire, David A. (Fed) <david.waltermire@nist.gov>
Sent: Tuesday, June 9, 2020 7:33 PM
To: Hannes Tschofenig <Hannes.Tschofenig@arm.com>om>; suit <suit@ietf.org>
Subject: Is draft-ietf-suit-manifest-07 ready for WGLC?

I'd like to get a sense from the working group about how mature everyone thinks this draft is. Do you think there are any significant areas or work that still need to be addressed before starting a WGLC?

Dave

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From: Suit <suit-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Hannes Tschofenig
Sent: Tuesday, June 9, 2020 1:15 PM
To: suit <suit@ietf.org>
Subject: [Suit] draft-ietf-suit-manifest-07

Hi all,

I just submitted version -07 of the manifest draft.

Here are the changes:

* Corrected the boilerplate text (it was wrong also in the architecture and the information model draft)
* All CDDL text is now concentrated in one place. This should make it easier to read.
* Fixed various TBDs for parameter descriptions in the text
* Enhanced IANA consideration section
* Completed the Implementation Conformance Matrix
* Removed mailing list info

Here is the doc:
https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-suit-manifest-07&amp;data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Caeb629d8c4974384e31d08d80ca23065%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C637273238026315038&amp;sdata=x7vJqnQn2BZ5vB6epqMWQxKQcZDPge2vcrDXFOdUkJo%3D&amp;reserved=0

Here is the diff:
https://gcc02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Frfcdiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-suit-manifest-07&amp;data=02%7C01%7Cdavid.waltermire%40nist.gov%7Caeb629d8c4974384e31d08d80ca23065%7C2ab5d82fd8fa4797a93e054655c61dec%7C1%7C0%7C637273238026324995&amp;sdata=N3%2FREsY%2BWdbGNueWgx5O9wnvz7iivoa%2FJtT%2FkPx75%2BE%3D&amp;reserved=0

Ciao
Hannes

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