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Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com> Tue, 26 May 2020 17:06 UTC

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From: Thomas Fossati <Thomas.Fossati@arm.com>
To: Xavier de Foy <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com>, "T2TRG@irtf.org" <T2TRG@irtf.org>
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Hi Xavier,

On 25/05/2020, 19:19, "Xavier de Foy" <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> This new version includes the comments/suggestions from Thomas on the
> mailing list, and improvements discussed in the IETF 107 presentation
> (research challenges added in 4.3.x sections, new distributed system
> example in 4.2, security considerations, improvements to flow and
> readability).
>
> Additional comments and reviews are most welcome,

This doesn't count as an "additional review" but, FWIW,
I have read the new version and was pleased with the result.

Thanks, cheers!

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