Re: [tao-discuss] I-D Action: draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt

Hi,

This looks good, thanks.

Nits:

If you want section 6 as an Appendix, you should move it to the back
(after --- back in Kramdown).

RFCs 3160, 1718, 1539, 1391 are already Obsolete, don't need to be in Updates:

You need to obsolete RFC 6722, not update it.

The RFC Editor doesn't like xrefs in the Abstract, just use the name of the RFC, i.e. "RFC 6722" (with a space).

It would be normal practice to say "This document obsoletes RFC 6722." in both the Abstract and at the end of the Introduction.

Regards
    Brian

On 18-Jan-24 03:02, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> Internet-Draft draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt is now available.
> 
>     Title:   Retiring the Tao of the IETF
>     Authors: Niels ten Oever
>              Greg Wood
>     Name:    draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt
>     Pages:   46
>     Dates:   2024-01-17
> 
> Abstract:
> 
>     This document retires the Tao of the IETF as an IETF-maintained
>     document.  It includes the rationale for the retirement and the last
>     edition of the Tao as published via the process described in
>     [RFC6722].  Information that new participants need to engage in the
>     work of the IETF will continue to be updated on the IETF website in a
>     more timely and accessible manner.
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-tenoever-tao-retirement/
> 
> There is also an HTMLized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> 
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