Re: [tao-discuss] I-D Action: draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt

[Niels ten Oever <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Brian,

I managed to make all things happen, except for the Appendix suggestion, not sure how to do that in markdown. So perhaps we can leave that for the RFC editor to help us with :)

Best,

Niels

Receipts: https://github.com/ietf/tao/commit/83ad4469e1d339f05d9157ba95615f425c227287

On 17-01-2024 21:54, Brian E Carpenter wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> This looks good, thanks.
> 
> Nits:
> 
> If you want section 6 as an Appendix, you should move it to the back
> (after --- back in Kramdown).
> 
> RFCs 3160, 1718, 1539, 1391 are already Obsolete, don't need to be in Updates:
> 
> You need to obsolete RFC 6722, not update it.
> 
> The RFC Editor doesn't like xrefs in the Abstract, just use the name of the RFC, i.e. "RFC 6722" (with a space).
> 
> It would be normal practice to say "This document obsoletes RFC 6722." in both the Abstract and at the end of the Introduction.
> 
> Regards
>     Brian
> 
> On 18-Jan-24 03:02, [e-mail] wrote:
>> Internet-Draft draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt is now available.
>>
>>     Title:   Retiring the Tao of the IETF
>>     Authors: Niels ten Oever
>>              Greg Wood
>>     Name:    draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01.txt
>>     Pages:   46
>>     Dates:   2024-01-17
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>     This document retires the Tao of the IETF as an IETF-maintained
>>     document.  It includes the rationale for the retirement and the last
>>     edition of the Tao as published via the process described in
>>     [RFC6722].  Information that new participants need to engage in the
>>     work of the IETF will continue to be updated on the IETF website in a
>>     more timely and accessible manner.
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-tenoever-tao-retirement/
>>
>> There is also an HTMLized version available at:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-tenoever-tao-retirement-01
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>>
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