Re: [Taps] TAPS WGLC: draft-ietf-taps-transports-08

hi Michael,

thanks for your review and comments! Commentcomments inline

> On 09 Dec 2015, at 14:24, Scharf, Michael (Michael) <michael.scharf@alcatel-lucent.com> wrote:
> 
> I think the abstract could better describe the actual content of the document, e.g., with a sentence like “… surveys, classifies and compares the protocol mechanisms …”.

Presuming we'll roll an -09 with WGLC comments, yes, agree fully and have made the change in the working copy (https://github.com/britram/taps-transports/draft-ietf-taps-transports.md).

> It could also list the protocols that are in scope of the document, or it could borrow other text from Section 1.

I think I'd prefer to list the protocols. Done.

> It is not clear to me what a reader could learn from the statement “… to inform the work of the IETF TAPS Working Group”, in particular in a couple of years from now when the WG may not exist any more.

This was also, I think, originally intended to be pulled out before publication. Cut.

>  In Section 4.1, it may be better to refer to RFC 7414 instead of RFC 4614.

Yep, oops.

> Also, I think it would be appropriate to better emphasize that the section just gives an overview of TCP and is not intended to be a comprehensive description.

Done in first para.

Thanks again, cheers,

Brian

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> Michael
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> From: Taps [mailto:taps-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Aaron Falk
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> This email announces a TAPS Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on:
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>         Services provided by IETF transport protocols and congestion control mechanisms
>         draft-ietf-taps-transports-08.txt
> 
> Due to the timing (many people take time off during the December holidays), this WGLC will run for slightly longer than usual - it will be for just over 3 weeks, ending at midnight US Eastern (daylight) Time on Thursday, December 31st.  Comments should be sent to the taps@ietf.org list, although purely editorial comments may be sent directly to the authors (draft-ietf-taps-transports@ietf.org).
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> We're looking for at least a couple more reviews during WGLC - please email the chair (aaron.falk@gmail.com) if you're interested and willing to review this draft (otherwise, we'll have to go "beat the bushes" for reviewers).
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> Thanks,
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> --aaron
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