Re: [tcpm] WGLC on draft-ietf-tcpm-early-rexmt-01

Hi, I've read the draft and I have one very minor comment about it.
It seems to me that the definition of "outstading data/segments" in the document
is a bit ambigious. If it simply defines "data/segments sent but not yet acknowledged",
the data/segments in SACK blocks can be excluded from the definition.

I prefer to have something like the following explanation in the document.
outstanding data/segement is data/segments sent but not yet acknowledged with 
cumulative ACKs and does not include data/segments in SACK blocks.

Thanks,
--
Yoshifumi Nishida
nishida@sfc.wide.ad.jp

From: "Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-MS00)[Verizon]" <wesley.m.eddy@nasa.gov>
Subject: Re: [tcpm] WGLC on draft-ietf-tcpm-early-rexmt-01
Date: Wed, 13 May 2009 13:36:48 -0500
Message-ID: <C304DB494AC0C04C87C6A6E2FF5603DB2214AF2743@NDJSSCC01.ndc.nasa.gov>

 > TCP Maintainers & Minor Extenders: The WGLC came and went on the
 > Early Retransmit draft without a single comment.  If it really is
 > perfect, then someone should speak up and say so :).
 > 
 > As the chairs, we don't have a good feeling about forwarding this
 > draft up for publication without any discussion in the WG, so we
 > are proposing to hold it here until at least a handful of people
 > submit comments on it. 
 > 
 > Please review and provide WGLC feedback on this draft so that it
 > can make progress:
 > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-early-rexmt-01
 > 
 > ---------------------------
 > Wes Eddy
 > Network & Systems Architect
 > Verizon FNS / NASA GRC
 > Office: (216) 433-6682
 > ---------------------------
 > 
 > 
 > >-----Original Message-----
 > >From: tcpm-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:tcpm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
 > >Eddy, Wesley M. (GRC-RCN0)[Verizon]
 > >Sent: Tuesday, April 14, 2009 11:46 AM
 > >To: tcpm@ietf.org
 > >Cc: k.avrachenkov@sophia.inria.fr; Josh Blanton; mallman@icir.org
 > >Subject: [tcpm] WGLC on draft-ietf
 > >
 > >We'd like to start a 2-week TCPM working group last call on the
 > >early retransmit draft:
 > >http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tcpm-early-rexmt-01
 > >I don't think the document itself says it, but our charter has
 > >this for an Experimental target.
 > >
 > >WGLC comments would be appreciated by April 30.
 > >
 > >The document has been cooking for a long time in TSVWG before
 > >TCPM took it, and the authors think it's pretty mature based
 > >on the progress on it there and in TCPM since it was taken
 > >up by TCPM at IETF 69.
 > >
 > >---------------------------
 > >Wes Eddy
 > >Network & Systems Architect
 > >Verizon FNS / NASA GRC
 > >Office: (216) 433-6682
 > >---------------------------
 > >
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