Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-27.txt

[John Scudder <[e-mail]>]

Hi Adrian,

I’ve just reviewed the diffs between the telechat version (24) and this one. LGTM with two minor exceptions:

   Note that QUIC [RFC9000] natively support the switching and steering
   functions.

Should be “supports”, and

                   [RFC5472] describes the
   applicability of IPFIX and makes a comparison with RTFM, pointing out
   that, architecturally, while RTM talks about devices, IPFIX deals
   with processed to clarify that multiple of those processes may be co-
   located on the same machine.

Should be “deals with processes”.

I’m sure these are things the RFCEd would catch, but I’ll wait a bit before clicking to approve, in case you want to pick these up in a final revision.

Thanks for all the effort,

—John

> On Aug 12, 2023, at 5:21 PM, Adrian Farrel <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> 
> Hi,
> 
> This revision addresses the Comments raised by the IESG during their review.
> 
> Looks like the document is approved pending this update and John's vacation.
> 
> Thanks to everyone for their help in getting this far.
> 
> Cheers,
> Adrian
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering
> Architecture and Signaling (TEAS) WG of the IETF.
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>   Title           : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic Engineering
>   Author          : Adrian Farrel
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-27.txt
>   Pages           : 95
>   Date            : 2023-08-12
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the principles of traffic engineering (TE) in
>   the Internet.  The document is intended to promote better
>   understanding of the issues surrounding traffic engineering in IP
>   networks and the networks that support IP networking, and to provide
>   a common basis for the development of traffic engineering
>   capabilities for the Internet.  The principles, architectures, and
>   methodologies for performance evaluation and performance optimization
>   of operational networks are also discussed.
> 
>   This work was first published as RFC 3272 in May 2002.  This document
>   obsoletes RFC 3272 by making a complete update to bring the text in
>   line with best current practices for Internet traffic engineering and
>   to include references to the latest relevant work in the IETF.
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