Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-27.txt

[Adrian Farrel <[e-mail]>]

I'm not going to get to this before Monday.

Do a note for the RFC Ed? Or I'll keep a note for auth48

 

On 18/08/2023 19:46 BST John Scudder <[e-mail]> wrote:

 

 

Hi Adrian,

 

I’ve just reviewed the diffs between the telechat version (24) and this one. LGTM with two minor exceptions:

 

Note that QUIC [RFC9000] natively support the switching and steering

functions.

 

Should be “supports”, and

 

[RFC5472] describes the

applicability of IPFIX and makes a comparison with RTFM, pointing out

that, architecturally, while RTM talks about devices, IPFIX deals

with processed to clarify that multiple of those processes may be co-

located on the same machine.

 

Should be “deals with processes”.

 

I’m sure these are things the RFCEd would catch, but I’ll wait a bit before clicking to approve, in case you want to pick these up in a final revision.

 

Thanks for all the effort,

 

—John

 

On Aug 12, 2023, at 5:21 PM, Adrian Farrel <[e-mail]> wrote:

 

 

Hi,

 

This revision addresses the Comments raised by the IESG during their review.

 

Looks like the document is approved pending this update and John's vacation.

 

Thanks to everyone for their help in getting this far.

 

Cheers,

Adrian

 

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts

directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering

Architecture and Signaling (TEAS) WG of the IETF.

 

Title : Overview and Principles of Internet Traffic Engineering

Author : Adrian Farrel

Filename : draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-27.txt

Pages : 95

Date : 2023-08-12

 

Abstract:

This document describes the principles of traffic engineering (TE) in

the Internet. The document is intended to promote better

understanding of the issues surrounding traffic engineering in IP

networks and the networks that support IP networking, and to provide

a common basis for the development of traffic engineering

capabilities for the Internet. The principles, architectures, and

methodologies for performance evaluation and performance optimization

of operational networks are also discussed.

 

This work was first published as RFC 3272 in May 2002. This document

obsoletes RFC 3272 by making a complete update to bring the text in

line with best current practices for Internet traffic engineering and

to include references to the latest relevant work in the IETF.

 

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