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[Teas] Re: RtgDir Last Call review of draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-07

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 13 August 2024 22:26 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Thanks for the review, Alvaro.

> I have two concerns:
>
> (1) Security Considerations
>
> The text in §6 is good.  For completeness, it would benefit from a
> pointer to the Security Considerations in rfc8453 and rfc9543, as well
> as the Privacy Considerations in that last document.

Yes Good points.
Updated in the working copy.

> (2) References
>
> Based on the definitions from the IESG Statement on Normative and
> Informative References [1], I believe some of the Informative
> references should be Normative because they refer to "documents that
> must be read to understand or implement the technology" in this
> document.

[snip]

You are quite right. We were lazy.

We'll give that a careful going over.

Cheers,
Adrian

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