[Teas] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20

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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Not Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-teas-yang-te-topo-20
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-05-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-05-15
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major Concerns:

See https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines.  The
Security Considerations section MUST follow the template provided on
that web page, and the guidelines require normative references to
[RFC5246] and [RFC6536], among others. These two RFCs do not appear
in the references.

Minor Concerns:



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