Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06

[Joel Halpern Direct <[e-mail]>]

That proposed sentence would be better.  Still, I do not see that the 
sentence adds much value.  While I can live with the replacement, I 
think we would be better off simply removing the sentence.

Yours,
Joel

On 7/16/2020 8:08 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote:
> Hi Joel,
> 
> Thanks for your comment.
> 
> Actually the word "such" in that sentence refers to a set of candidate technologies in the underlay, TSN and FlexE are just two examples. We could rephrase that sentence to make it clear. How about:
> 
> "The usage of such type of underlying technologies... "?
> 
> Best regards,
> Jie
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Joel M. Halpern [mailto:[e-mail]]
>> Sent: Wednesday, July 15, 2020 9:15 PM
>> To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
>> Subject: Re: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06
>>
>> Given what you say, is the sentence needed?  It leads the reader to think
>> these two things are more important.  (I am not objecting to the discussion
>> under L2 technologies, just to this one sentence earlier.)
>>
>> Yours,
>> Joel
>>
>> On 7/15/2020 5:32 AM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote:
>>> Hi Daniele,
>>>
>>> Thanks for your comment. Please see my reply inline:
>>>
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: Daniele Ceccarelli [mailto:[e-mail]]
>>>> Sent: Wednesday, July 15, 2020 4:33 PM
>>>> To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
>>>> Subject: RE: Status update on draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06
>>>>
>>>> Hi Jie,
>>>>
>>>> Just a minor clarification. In section 3.2 there is a statement saying:
>>>>
>>>> "The usage of such  (referring to TSN and FlexE) underlying
>>>> technologies for
>>>> VPN+ service needs to be considered."
>>>>
>>>> This is not mandating the usage of TNS and FlexE as underlaying
>>>> technologies right?
>>>
>>> No, they are just listed as candidate technologies which may help to provide
>> the required performance.
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>> Jie
>>>
>>>>
>>>> Thanks
>>>> Daniele
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>> From: Teas <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Dongjie (Jimmy)
>>>> Sent: den 15 juli 2020 09:10
>>>> To: [e-mail]
>>>> Subject: [Teas] Status update on draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06
>>>>
>>>> Hi all,
>>>>
>>>> We've uploaded a new revision of draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06. The
>>>> changes in this version are:
>>>>
>>>> 1. Some further clarification about the terms used in this document.
>>>>
>>>> 2. In section 4.1, the architecture figure is updated to better
>>>> reflect the relationship between overlay VPN service and underlay VTN.
>>>>
>>>> 3. In section 5.4, some further descriptions about SR control plane are
>> added.
>>>>
>>>> 4. In section 5.6, text about the applicability of service data
>>>> models is simplified, as the details will be covered in NS-DT,
>>>> draft-wd-teas-transport-slice-yang,
>>>> draft-king-teas-applicability-actn-slicing,
>>>> etc.
>>>>
>>>> 5. Some editorial changes.
>>>>
>>>> As always, review comments and feedbacks are appreciated.
>>>>
>>>> Best regards,
>>>> Jie
>>>>
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: Teas [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of
>>>>> [e-mail]
>>>>> Sent: Monday, July 13, 2020 4:47 PM
>>>>> To: [e-mail]
>>>>> Cc: [e-mail]
>>>>> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06.txt
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>>> directories.
>>>>> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture
>>>>> and Signaling WG of the IETF.
>>>>>
>>>>>           Title           : A Framework for Enhanced Virtual Private
>>>>> Networks (VPN+) Service
>>>>>           Authors         : Jie Dong
>>>>>                             Stewart Bryant
>>>>>                             Zhenqiang Li
>>>>>                             Takuya Miyasaka
>>>>>                             Young Lee
>>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06.txt
>>>>> 	Pages           : 35
>>>>> 	Date            : 2020-07-13
>>>>>
>>>>> Abstract:
>>>>>      This document describes the framework for Enhanced Virtual Private
>>>>>      Network (VPN+) service.  The purpose is to support the needs of
>> new
>>>>>      applications, particularly applications that are associated with 5G
>>>>>      services, by utilizing an approach that is based on existing VPN and
>>>>>      Traffic Engineering (TE) technologies and adds features that specific
>>>>>      services require over and above traditional VPNs.
>>>>>
>>>>>      Typically, VPN+ will be used to form the underpinning of network
>>>>>      slicing, but could also be of use in its own right providing enhanced
>>>>>      connectivity services between customer sites.
>>>>>
>>>>>      It is envisaged that enhanced VPNs will be delivered using a
>>>>>      combination of existing, modified, and new networking technologies.
>>>>>      This document provides an overview of relevant technologies and
>>>>>      identifies some areas for potential new work.
>>>>>
>>>>>      Comparing to traditional VPNs, It is not envisaged that quite large
>>>>>      numbers of VPN+ services will be deployed in a network.  In other
>>>>>      word, it is not intended that all existing VPNs supported by a
>>>>>      network will use VPN+ related techniques.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn/
>>>>>
>>>>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06
>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-0
>>>>> 6
>>>>>
>>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn-06
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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>> tools.ietf.org.
>>>>>
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>>>>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>>>>
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