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Re: [Teas] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-22

"Darren Dukes (ddukes)" <ddukes@cisco.com> Thu, 01 February 2024 14:54 UTC

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From: "Darren Dukes (ddukes)" <ddukes@cisco.com>
To: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
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Hello Dhruv, thank you for the prompt response. I’ve reviewed the diffs, they address the issues I saw and clarified the RFC8776 inclusion.

Thanks
  Darren

On 2024-01-30, 6:08 AM, "Dhruv Dhody" <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

Hi Darren,

Thanks for your review. An update has been posted. See diff - https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-22&url2=draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-23&difftype=--html

On Wed, Jan 24, 2024 at 2:22 AM Darren Dukes via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Reviewer: Darren Dukes
Review result: Has Nits

I reviewed this draft and appreciate the effort that went into the document.  I
did not find any major issues with this draft and only a few minor issues/nits.

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Minor

Section 1
- Is the TE model an Abstract TE model (vs underlay or overlay) as per RFC8795?
 If so can you elaborate on that?

Dhruv: It is "abstract" and relevant sentence is added.


Section 2.2
For some VN members of a VN, the customers are allowed to configure the actual
path (i.e., detailed virtual nodes and virtual links) over the VN/abstract
topology agreed mutually between CNC and MDSC prior to or a topology created by
the MDSC as part of VN instantiation. - Please rewrite this sentence, "MDSC
prior to or a topology", I could not parse the intended meaning.

Dhruv: Text updated.


Section 2.2
- Please provide a definition for S1-S11. I believe they're abstract nodes as
defined in an abstract TE model as per RFC8795.

Dhruv: I have added text to specify that they makeup the underlay topology.


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Nits

Section 4.3.1
- Is there a reason for the difference in names for path-affinities-values vs
path-affinity-names - could/should you make affinity names consistent? if so
please do.

Dhruv: This is coming from a grouping from RFC 8776 and thus too late to make any change :)


- Please replace all MSDC with MDSC


Dhruv: Done!

Thanks again for your review!

- Dhruv

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