[Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-26: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 August 2023 03:53 UTC

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Subject: [Teas] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-26: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-26: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-teas-rfc3272bis-26
CC @ekline

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## Nits

### S5.1.3.3

* "an ingress LSRs and an egress LSRs"

  Maybe strike the two "an"s.

### S5.1.3.4

* "is comprised of" -> composed?