Re: [Teas] I-D Action: Draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-02.txt

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: Draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-02.txt
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Hi Dan, 

Thanks for taking care of this draft. FWIW, you may find some few comments at:

* pdf: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-02-rev%20Med.pdf
* doc: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-02-rev%20Med.doc

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de
> daniel@olddog.co.uk
> Envoyé : mercredi 7 septembre 2022 11:09
> À : teas@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: [Teas] I-D Action: Draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-
> slicing-02.txt
> 
> Morning All,
> 
> Just a quick update to fix a few nits in the I-D. No substantive
> changes.
> 
> We continue to discuss the ACTN xMI requirement amongst the
> authors of draft-ietf-ccamp-yang-otn-slicing and draft-ietf-teas-
> applicability-actn-slicing. Shortly, we will post our conclusions
> to the list and suggest how we plan to move forward.
> 
> BR, Dan.
> 
> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [Teas] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-02.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture
> and Signaling WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Applicability of Abstraction and Control
> of
> Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN) to Network Slicing
>         Authors         : Daniel King
>                           John Drake
>                           Haomian Zheng
>                           Adrian Farrel
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-
> 02.txt
>   Pages           : 23
>   Date            : 2022-09-06
> 
> Abstract:
>    Network abstraction is a technique that can be applied to a
> network
>    domain to obtain a view of potential connectivity across the
> network
>    by utilizing a set of policies to select network resources.
> 
>    Network slicing is an approach to network operations that
> builds on
>    the concept of network abstraction to provide programmability,
>    flexibility, and modularity.  It may use techniques such as
> Software
>    Defined Networking (SDN) and Network Function Virtualization
> (NFV) to
>    create multiple logical or virtual networks, each tailored for
> a set
>    of services that share the same set of requirements.
> 
>    Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered Networks (ACTN)
> is
>    described in RFC 8453.  It defines an SDN-based architecture
> that
>    relies on the concept of network and service abstraction to
> detach
>    network and service control from the underlying data plane.
> 
>    This document outlines the applicability of ACTN to network
> slicing
>    in a Traffic Engineering (TE) network that utilizes IETF
> technology.
>    It also identifies the features of network slicing not
> currently
>    within the scope of ACTN, and indicates where ACTN might be
> extended.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-
> actn-slicing/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-teas-applicability-
> actn-slicing-0
> 2.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-applicability-
> actn-slicing
> -02
> 
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at
> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
> 
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