Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01.txt

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Mon, 22 February 2021 17:31 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Teas] I-D Action: draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01.txt
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The effort to address the discussion about the term "endpoint" seems to 
have made things worse, not better.  I would have expected the changes 
to be deferred until we had WG rough consensus on what the changes 
should look like.

Yours,
Joel

On 2/22/2021 11:21 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Traffic Engineering Architecture and Signaling WG of the IETF.
> 
>          Title           : Definition of IETF Network Slices
>          Authors         : Reza Rokui
>                            Shunsuke Homma
>                            Kiran Makhijani
>                            Luis M. Contreras
>                            Jeff Tantsura
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 17
> 	Date            : 2021-02-22
> 
> Abstract:
>     This document provides a definition of the term "IETF Network Slice"
>     for use within the IETF and specifically as a reference for other
>     IETF documents that describe or use aspects of network slices.
> 
>     The document also describes the characteristics of an IETF network
>     slice, related terms and their meanings, and explains how IETF
>     network slices can be used in combination with end-to-end network
>     slices or independent of them.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition/
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-teas-ietf-network-slice-definition-01
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