Revision of cookbook
Peter Furniss <cziwprf@pluto.ulcc.ac.uk> Tue, 12 October 1993 00:01 UTC
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From: Peter Furniss <cziwprf@pluto.ulcc.ac.uk>
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Subject: Revision of cookbook
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I have just sent a revision of the cookbook to internet-drafts. It
should turn up as draft-ietf-thinosi-cookbook-01.txt in a few days.
It should also be on the thinosi archive (pluto.ulcc.ac.uk:ulcc/thinosi)
sometime on Tuesday.
Changes include :
one word change (add "informal") in last para of introduciton
correction of the duplicat "group III" paragraphs
removal of 2.4, model of the implementation
Pruning of last paragraphs in 3.1
Changes (mostly shorter) at beginnng of 3.2
Changes in first para of 4.2
Additional para at end of 4.3.2 (clarifying that encoding choices
do not apply to application protocol)
Odd editorials here and there
All fairly minor, and in keeping with the status proposed in my earlier
message - that this is now intended to be an informational.
Peter
- Revision of cookbook Peter Furniss