Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on PTP Enterprise Profile (draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03.txt)

Karen ODonoghue <kodonog@pobox.com> Mon, 07 July 2014 12:51 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on PTP Enterprise Profile (draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03.txt)
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I should have caught this. I'll work with the authors to get it updated
with the update
addressing all other WGLC comments.

Karen

On 7/7/14, 8:38 AM, Brian Haberman wrote:
> Allow me to be the first to make a WGLC comment (even though I will be
> doing the AD Evaluation later on) and it will be a single comment...
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> Status of this Memo
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> Regards,
> Brian
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> On 7/4/14 11:24 AM, Karen ODonoghue wrote:
>> This email initiates a two week working group last call on the draft
>> referenced below. Please send any comments or concerns to the tictoc
>> mailing list. The WGLC will end on Friday, 18 July 2014.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Karen
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>> On 7/2/14, 11:30 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>  This draft is a work item of the Timing over IP Connection and Transfer of Clock Working Group of the IETF.
>>>
>>>         Title           : Enterprise Profile for the Precision Time Protocol With Mixed Multicast and Unicast Messages
>>>         Authors         : Doug Arnold
>>>                           Heiko Gerstung
>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03.txt
>>> 	Pages           : 12
>>> 	Date            : 2014-07-02
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>     This document describes a profile for the use of the Precision
>>>     Time Protocol in an IPV4 or IPv6 Enterprise information system
>>>     environment.  The profile uses the End to End Delay Measurement
>>>     Mechanism, allows both multicast and unicast Delay Request and Delay
>>>     Response Messages.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile/
>>>
>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03
>>>
>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03
>>>
>>>
>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
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