Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on PTP Enterprise Profile (draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03.txt)

[Brian Haberman <[e-mail]>]

Allow me to be the first to make a WGLC comment (even though I will be
doing the AD Evaluation later on) and it will be a single comment...

Status of this Memo
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The above is invalid for a WG document.  All documents published as WG
documents cannot have a no derivative work clause in them.  See section
3.3 of BCP 78.  This clause should have been changed upon the
publication of the -00 version of the WG draft.

Regards,
Brian


On 7/4/14 11:24 AM, Karen ODonoghue wrote:
> This email initiates a two week working group last call on the draft
> referenced below. Please send any comments or concerns to the tictoc
> mailing list. The WGLC will end on Friday, 18 July 2014.
> 
> Regards,
> Karen
> 
> On 7/2/14, 11:30 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>  This draft is a work item of the Timing over IP Connection and Transfer of Clock Working Group of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Enterprise Profile for the Precision Time Protocol With Mixed Multicast and Unicast Messages
>>         Authors         : Doug Arnold
>>                           Heiko Gerstung
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03.txt
>> 	Pages           : 12
>> 	Date            : 2014-07-02
>>
>> Abstract:
>>     This document describes a profile for the use of the Precision
>>     Time Protocol in an IPV4 or IPv6 Enterprise information system
>>     environment.  The profile uses the End to End Delay Measurement
>>     Mechanism, allows both multicast and unicast Delay Request and Delay
>>     Response Messages.
>>
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile/
>>
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-enterprise-profile-03
>>
>>
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