Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt
Greg Dowd <gdowd@symmetricom.com> Mon, 10 June 2013 18:00 UTC
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Subject: Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt
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I think the confusion was that your comment suggested using an OUI, not a profile OID (EUI-48). The OUI would not have been sufficient to distinguish multiple profiles from an organization as Tim noted. I'll review your comments with the team. Thanks! Greg Dowd | Symmetricom(r), Inc. Staff Scientist 2300 Orchard Parkway, San Jose, CA 95131 Direct: 408.964.7643 gdowd@symmetricom.com<mailto:gdowd@symmetricom.com> | www.symmetricom.com<http://www.symmetricom.com/> Symmetricom. Leading the world in precise time solutions. From: tictoc-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:tictoc-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Kevin Gross Sent: Monday, June 10, 2013 10:10 AM To: Tim Frost Cc: tictoc@ietf.org; Karen ODonoghue Subject: Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt Thanks for addressing my comments. It looks like there are two outstanding. 1. ClockInstanceType and 2. ClockProfileType It sounds like you intend to address (1) in a future revision. With regards to (2), I think you misunderstand how the profileIdentifier works. Please have a look at Section 19.3.3 of IEEE 1588-2008. This is an EUI-48, not merely an OUI. Organizations can change the bottom 24 bits to indicate new profiles or revisions of existing ones. Maintaining our own enumeration of profiles does not seem like a feasible undertaking. Kevin Gross +1-303-447-0517 Media Network Consultant AVA Networks - www.AVAnw.com<http://www.avanw.com/>, www.X192.org<http://www.X192.org> On Fri, May 17, 2013 at 2:33 AM, Tim Frost <tfrost@symmetricom.com<mailto:tfrost@symmetricom.com>> wrote: Hi Kevin, Thank you for taking the time to go through this MIB. We did consider your comments, and they were addressed in -05 (the latest version, and the subject of the last call). I've gone through each of your comments below; it looks like we missed one, and decided against another, but the remainder have been done. The change history from the -05 draft reads: -05 Feb 13 Several changes in response to comments from Alun Luchuk and Kevin Gross: - Modified the use of wellKnownTransportTypes and wellKnownEncapsulationTypes - changed ptpbaseClockPortSyncOneStep to ptpbaseClockPortSyncTwoStep to match IEEE1588 semantics - Re-ordered textual conventions to be alphabetic - Changed some types from Integer32 to use defined textual conventions - various minor descriptive text changes In detail: Abstract: Add a bracketed reference to IEEE 1588-2008 - DONE Section 1: s/defined to monitor, measure the performance/defined to monitor and measure the performance - DONE Section 1.1 What in this MIB is profile dependent? I did not identify anything in my review. It would be desirable. if possible, to have a profile-independent MIB. - TF: Removed erroneous text about Telecom Profile - there is nothing in this MIB that is particular to that profile. TEXTUAL-CONVENTION general issues - Consider alphabetizing - DONE ClockInstanceType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION definition - Description requires elucidation or a reference. - TF: not done, looks like this one slipped through. ClockProfileType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION definition Consider using and OUI instead of an enumeration. IEEE 1588-1588 requires an OUI be associated with each profile. - TF: OUI would be specific to the organization, not the profile. If the ITU (for instance) developed more than one profile, then they would have the same OUI. Therefore it is best (in the authors' opinion) to stick to using an enumeration OBJECT-TYPE general issues Consider being consistent about repeating TEXTUAL-CONVENTION descriptions, explicitly referencing them or assuming readers will track down the reference without reminder. - TF: We've tried to be as consistent as we can. Of 17 TEXTUAL-CONVENTIONS, 13 are directly referenced to IEEE1588 sections. The remainder don't directly map onto IEEE1588 quantities, but onto associated concepts, and we have tried to explain these in the description. Certainly one could do with a better description, as you note above. ptpDomainClockPortsTotal OBJECT-TYPE I assume this is the number of ports for the managed PTP-capable system (i.e. a router or switch). Suggest adding "in the system" to the description to clarify scope of count. - DONE ptpbaseClockTimePropertiesDSTable OBJECT-TYPE s/clock Timeproperties Datasets for/clock time properties datasets for - DONE PtpbaseClockTransDefaultDSEntry SEQUENCE Use ClockDomainType textual convention instead of Integer32 for ptpbaseClockTransDefaultDSPrimaryDomain - DONE PtpbaseClockPortEntry SEQUENCE Change ptpbaseClockPortSyncOneStep to ptpbaseClockPortSyncTwoStep to match 1588 semantics for this Boolean - DONE ptpbaseClockPortRunningEncapsulationType OBJECT-TYPE Needs a textual convention or description of allowed values and their meanings - TF: Now uses an autonomous type instead of Integer32 ptpbaseClockPortTransDSlogMinPdelayReqInt OBJECT-TYPE Change to ClockIntervalBase2 type DONE Section 5: Copy-paste error: "creation and/or manipulation of tunnels" - TF: Section changed since -03, no longer has this phrase. Section 6: To be added - DONE Best regards, Tim Frost From: tictoc-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:tictoc-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:tictoc-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:tictoc-bounces@ietf.org>] On Behalf Of Kevin Gross Sent: 16 May 2013 18:09 To: Karen ODonoghue Cc: tictoc@ietf.org<mailto:tictoc@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt I submitted comments on v03 11 January (http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/tictoc/current/msg01331.html). Vinay indicated in a short message on 23 January the comments would be addressed in the next version (http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/tictoc/current/msg01333.html). v04 was published 31 January. I did not see any notes from the authors associated with that revision. A quick check of the v03-v04 diff shows evidence that not all my comments were directly addressed. Can I get a summary of how my comments were addressed? I'm fine if some of these were rejected but I would like to verify that they were given consideration. Kevin Gross +1-303-447-0517<tel:%2B1-303-447-0517> Media Network Consultant AVA Networks - www.AVAnw.com<http://www.avanw.com/>, www.X192.org<http://www.X192.org> On Thu, May 16, 2013 at 9:41 AM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org<mailto:odonoghue@isoc.org>> wrote: This message initiates a two week TICTOC Working Group Last Call on advancing: Title : Precision Time Protocol Version 2 (PTPv2) Management Information Base Author(s) : Vinay Shankarkumar, Laurent Montini, Tim Frost, Greg Dowd Filename : draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt Pages : 77 Date : 2013-02-25 http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib/?include_text=1 as a Standards Track RFC. Substantive comments and statements of support for advancing this document should be directed to the mailing list. Editorial suggestions can be sent directly to the authors. 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- [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05.txt Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Kevin Gross
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Smiley, Russell
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [TICTOC] WG consensus to forward draft-ietf-t… Smiley, Russell
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [TICTOC] WG consensus to forward draft-ietf-t… Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Tim Frost
- [TICTOC] Fwd: WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-0… Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Alan Luchuk
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Kevin Gross
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Greg Dowd
- Re: [TICTOC] WGLC on draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-05… Kevin Gross