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Re: [TLS] WGLC for draft-ietf-tls-rfc8446bis and draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis

Christopher Wood <caw@heapingbits.net> Mon, 22 May 2023 19:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] WGLC for draft-ietf-tls-rfc8446bis and draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis
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We trust the editors will faithfully enact all editorial changes they agree with as the document moves forward in the process. If there were non-editorial comments that we overlooked, could you please resurface them?

Best,
Chris 


On May 21, 2023, at 7:44 PM, Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com> wrote:


On Fri, May 19, 2023 at 5:03 AM Christopher Wood <caw@heapingbits.net> wrote:
Thanks to everyone who provided reviews and feedback for these documents! I believe we have consensus to move both forward with changes that have been incorporated during the review cycle. We’ll start preparing the shepherd writeups and then move these on in the process.

Hi,

The comments I left are not addressed, even the fairly pedestrian corrections. EKR answered, although he certainly did not agree with all of them. For example, the label "resumption_master_secret" still appears, although that should have been changed in all instances.

thanks,
Rob
 

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