Re: [TLS] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-04

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 20 September 2021 12:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-04
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Meral, thank you for your review . I have entered a Yes ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2020-10-27, at 9:35, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team
> (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF
> Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-md5-sha1-deprecate-04
> 
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2020-10-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-10-28
> IESG Telechat date: NA
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC , no more
> comments other than those addressed on the list already.
> 
> Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> [Page 4], Section 7, typo : "deprecated.."-->"deprecated."
> [Page 4], Section 8, typo :"resgistry"-->"registry"
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> Best Regards,
> Meral
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