[TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10

Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 15 March 2021 15:28 UTC

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Subject: [TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-tls-dtls-connection-id-10
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2021-03-15
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-28
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Ready


Major Concerns:  None.


Minor Concerns:  None.


Nits:

Section 4: For increased clarity, I suggest:
OLD:
   real_type  The content type describing the payload.
NEW:
   real_type  The content type describing the cleartext payload.

[TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-d… Russ Housley via Datatracker
Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of dr… Thomas Fossati
Re: [TLS] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of dr… Lars Eggert