Re: [TLS] TLSv1.3 - Draft 26 - small typo need correction

[Sean Turner <[e-mail]>]

The double “the” got fixed, but the double and didn’t I submitted a PR so we don’t forget this.

spt

> On Mar 4, 2018, at 22:52, M K Saravanan <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> In TLSv1.3, draft 26, there is a small typographical error.  It needs
> to be corrected.
> 
> 
> (1)
> 
> Appendix D.  Backward Compatibility
> 
> Second Paragraph.  Second sentence.  There is a double "and".
> 
> /* Original */
> =========
> Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long as
> the ClientHello format remains compatible and and there is at least
> one protocol version supported by both the client and the server.
> ==========
> 
> /* Corrected */
> 
> ======
> Servers can also handle clients trying to use future versions of TLS as long as
> the ClientHello format remains compatible and there is at least
> one protocol version supported by both the client and the server.
> ======
> 
> (2)
> 
> Section 4.2.8.2. ECDHE Parameters
> 
> First paragraph, first sentence.  There is a double "the".
> 
> /* Original */
> =========
> ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the the
> opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure.
> =========
> 
> /* Corrected */
> =========
> ECDHE parameters for both clients and servers are encoded in the
> opaque key_exchange field of a KeyShareEntry in a KeyShare structure.
> =========
> 
> (3)
> 
> Appendix E.5.  Replay Attacks on 0-RTT
> 
> Second paragraph, second line.  There is a double "the".
> 
> /* Original */
> ===========
> If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks
> become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the the
> speed of cryptographic operations.
> ===========
> 
> /* Corrected */
> ==========
> If data can be replayed a large number of times, additional attacks
> become possible, such as making repeated measurements of the
> speed of cryptographic operations.
> ==========
> 
> Please correct them.
> 
> with regards,
> Saravanan
> 
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