[Drip] an editorial question on -arch
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Shuai & I are cleaning up the last of the -arch changes (essentially editorial, mostly clarifications) requested by AD & IESG reviews.
In his IOTDIR review, Thomas Fossati suggested:
* In Section 2.1, the following terms are already in the most recent
"RFC Editor Abbreviations List" [1] and can be removed:
* EdDSA
* HIP
* HIT
* HI
Shall we remove them and add the abbreviations list as a reference?
Or, considering the last 3 are not yet widely familiar, keep them for reader convenience?
Other than that, I believe the proposed -30 version addresses all (except the few consensus "wontfix") issues/comments/nits.
The proposed -30 pull request is at
https://github.com/ietf-wg-drip/draft-ietf-drip-arch/pull/54
- [Drip] an editorial question on -arch Stu Card
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