Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt

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From: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
To: Brandon Williams <brandon.williams@akamai.com>, "tram@ietf.org" <tram@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
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Hi Brandon,

Thanks for the detailed review. I have updated the draft to address most of the comments, please see the attached doc for responses to some of comments and nits.

Cheers,
-Tiru

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Brandon Williams [mailto:brandon.williams@akamai.com]
> Sent: Sunday, November 12, 2017 11:34 PM
> To: Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
> <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>; tram@ietf.org
> Cc: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
> 
> Hi Tiru,
> 
> I just finished a comprehensive review of the cumulative diffs against
> RFC5766. See attached (let me know if you prefer me to resend as e-mail
> body for list purposes).
> 
> You indicate that you addressed Marc's dual allocation related comments,
> but this draft doesn't address his comprehensive review comments, right?
> 
> Please let me know a target for addressing the rest of his comments and
> mine so I can try to stay on top of the shepherding work for the draft.
> 
> Thanks,
> --Brandon
> ________________________________________
> From: Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy
> <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
> Sent: Monday, October 23, 2017 2:48 AM
> To: tram@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
> 
> This revision addresses comments from Brandon and dual allocation related
> comments from Mark.
> 
> -Tiru
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: tram [mailto:tram-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-
> > drafts@ietf.org
> > Sent: Monday, October 23, 2017 12:14 PM
> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Cc: tram@ietf.org
> > Subject: [tram] I-D Action: draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the TURN Revised and Modernized WG of the
> > IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN): Relay Extensions
> > to Session Traversal Utilities for NAT (STUN)
> >         Authors         : Tirumaleswar Reddy
> >                           Alan Johnston
> >                           Philip Matthews
> >                           Jonathan Rosenberg
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12.txt
> >       Pages           : 83
> >       Date            : 2017-10-22
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    If a host is located behind a NAT, then in certain situations it can
> >    be impossible for that host to communicate directly with other hosts
> >    (peers).  In these situations, it is necessary for the host to use
> >    the services of an intermediate node that acts as a communication
> >    relay.  This specification defines a protocol, called TURN (Traversal
> >    Using Relays around NAT), that allows the host to control the
> >    operation of the relay and to exchange packets with its peers using
> >    the relay.  TURN differs from some other relay control protocols in
> >    that it allows a client to communicate with multiple peers using a
> >    single relay address.
> >
> >    The TURN protocol was designed to be used as part of the ICE
> >    (Interactive Connectivity Establishment) approach to NAT traversal,
> >    though it also can be used without ICE.
> >
> >    This document obsoletes [RFC5766] and [RFC6156].
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tram-turnbis-12
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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