Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt

Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> Sun, 14 August 2016 21:22 UTC

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Submitting -05.txt is great.  
Sue


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Hi Sue,
 
Thanks for the comments! Please take a look at my responses inline.
 



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Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-negotiations-04.txt 



 
 
Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits

 
Concerns:  None 
 
WG Request/Reminder:  We’ll need to make sure these parameters update the TRILL Yang data model.

 
Editorial NITs:
 

1.      
Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph

     The text would be clear if prior to the first paragraph beginning “lz is reported”, you add a section header with: “operations” as title.

 
[Mingui] Yes, good point! This has been done in the attached 05 version.
 

2.      
Section 3 page 6 
 
Step 0, #2, b 
 
Old:/Repeat step 1/ to 
New: /Repeat/Do step 1/ 
 
I think the first time through, you have not gotten to Step 1:.

 
[Mingui] That’s true.  I think it would also be fine if this phase (Do step 1) is deleted.

 
If this is not true, then this becomes a concern rather than a nit.

 

3.      
Section 4, page 8, paragraph 0, sub-paragraph 2). Paragraph begins

 
/2) when an Rbridge/
 
It may be nice to explain why only equal is treated.

 
-         
Less than Sz, it is not in campus

-         
Greater than Sz, some other trill Rbridge has limiting size
-         
Only if equal to Sz, it is possible that it changes Sz.

 
[Mingui] Yes, It’s clearer. I have listed these three possibilities with three bullets.
 
Sue Hares
 
So, I will submit the 05 version if there is no objection to above responses.
 
Thanks,
Mingui

Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-m… Susan Hares
Re: [trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-m… Mingui Zhang
[trill] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-trill-mtu-n… Susan Hares