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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Hi TSV-ART

Below is the proposed boiler plate text. I plan to send this to be included in the datatracker later this week. So if you have any feedback, please provide it now.


This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing
effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to
allow them to address any issues raised, and also to the IETF discussion list for
information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review together with any other last-call comments they receive.
Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org<mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org> if you reply to or forward this review.


Cheers



Magnus Westerlund

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