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Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Wed, 07 November 2018 03:04 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
To: "Scharf, Michael" <Michael.Scharf@hs-esslingen.de>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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On 2018-11-05 20:26, Scharf, Michael wrote:
Yes, please add a boiler plate text when a review is done via datatracker. In my last review I assumed that the text would be added automatically and then learnt after submission that it is missing…

After this has been submitted this text will be preloaded into the text box you enter the review into in the datatracker.


Regarding the wording: Is it really the “transport area directorate”, instead of, say, TSV-ART?


Yes, you are correct. this should be changed to "transport area review team's".

Taking also Joe's comments into account the text will be:

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing

effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for

the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to

allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for

information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please
always CC tsv-art@ietf.org<mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org> if you reply to or forward this review.




Cheers

Magnus



Michael

From: Tsv-art [mailto:tsv-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Magnus Westerlund
Sent: Monday, November 05, 2018 11:56 AM
To: tsv-art@ietf.org<mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org>
Subject: [Tsv-art] Proposed boilerplate review text


Hi TSV-ART

Below is the proposed boiler plate text. I plan to send this to be included in the datatracker later this week. So if you have any feedback, please provide it now.



This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing

effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for

the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to

allow them to address any issues raised, and also to the IETF discussion list for

information.



When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this

review together with any other last-call comments they receive.

Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org<mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org> if you reply to or forward this review.





Cheers



Magnus Westerlund



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