Re: [Tsv-art] Proposed boilerplate review text

[Joe Touch <[e-mail]>]

FWIW, the text wasn’t preloaded in the review I just posted, so I added it in a follow-up.

Joe

> On Nov 6, 2018, at 7:04 PM, Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> On 2018-11-05 20:26, Scharf, Michael wrote:
>> Yes, please add a boiler plate text when a review is done via datatracker. In my last review I assumed that the text would be added automatically and then learnt after submission that it is missing…
> After this has been submitted this text will be preloaded into the text box you enter the review into in the datatracker.
> 
> 
> 
>>  
>> Regarding the wording: Is it really the “transport area directorate”, instead of, say, TSV-ART?
> 
> Yes, you are correct. this should be changed to "transport area review team's".
> 
> Taking also Joe's comments into account the text will be:
> 
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing
> effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
> the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to 
> allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for 
> information. 
> 
> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
> review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please
> always CC [e-mail] <mailto:tsv-art@ietf..org> if you reply to or forward this review.
>   
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
>>  
>> Michael
>>  
>> From: Tsv-art [mailto:[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>] On Behalf Of Magnus Westerlund
>> Sent: Monday, November 05, 2018 11:56 AM
>> To: [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>
>> Subject: [Tsv-art] Proposed boilerplate review text
>>  
>> Hi TSV-ART
>> 
>> Below is the proposed boiler plate text. I plan to send this to be included in the datatracker later this week. So if you have any feedback, please provide it now.
>> 
>>  
>> 
>> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area directorate's ongoing
>> effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for
>> the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to 
>> allow them to address any issues raised, and also to the IETF discussion list for 
>> information. 
>>  
>> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
>> review together with any other last-call comments they receive.
>> Please always CC [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]> if you reply to or forward this review.
>>  
>>  
>> Cheers
>>  
>> Magnus Westerlund 
>>  
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