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Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma> Thu, 04 July 2019 17:59 UTC

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From: Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>
Date: Thu, 04 Jul 2019 18:59:38 +0100
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To: Suresh Krishnan <Suresh@kaloom.com>
Cc: Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de>, Joerg Ott <jo@acm.org>, IETF Discussion <ietf@ietf.org>, "its@ietf.org" <its@ietf.org>, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org>, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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Hi Suresh, Jorg

Thank you for answering the two comments. I would not have said better!



On Thu, Jul 4, 2019 at 6:26 PM Suresh Krishnan <Suresh@kaloom.com> wrote:

> Hi Joerg,
>   I just want to respond to two of your comments. I will let the authors
> chime in on the other comments.
>
> > On Jul 4, 2019, at 10:42 AM, Joerg Ott <ott@in.tum.de> wrote:
> > ...
> > I am sorry but this is not acceptable.  You are asking other people
> > to read the document and comment on it.  As such, we may certainly
> > expect that what we get to review in last call is ready for RFC.
> > This document clearly is not.
>
> Are their specific parts of the document that you are concerned about here
> on the clarity front? I have read the document and have not had any clarity
> issues (but that might be because I have been reading this for too long).
>
> > ...
> >>    Detailed comments:
> >>    In several places, the text reminds of patent jargon. Should I
> >>    worry? There doesn't appear
> >>    to be any IPR disclosure.
> >
> > Here, I'd really like to get an explicit response.
>
> The authors have confirmed that they have filed any necessary IPR
> disclosures as per BCP78/79 as documented in the shepherd writeup.
>
> Thanks
> Suresh



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Nabil Benamar
Associate Professor
Department of Computer Sciences
School of Technology
Moulay Ismail University
Meknes. Morocco

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