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Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46

Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma> Mon, 08 July 2019 05:45 UTC

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From: Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>
Date: Mon, 08 Jul 2019 06:45:13 +0100
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To: Joerg Ott <jo@acm.org>
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Subject: Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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Hi Joerg,

I have submitted -48 which fixes all issues you mentioned in your review.
Please have a look and let me know if this version is OK.

Thank you.

On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 12:23 PM Nabil Benamar <n.benamar@est.umi.ac.ma>
wrote:

> Dear Joerg,
>
> I want to add more clarification to one of your comments
>
>
>> sect 4.6: Clarify "A subnet may be formed over 802.11-OCB interfaces of
>> vehicles that are in close range (not by their in-vehicle interfaces)."
>> further.
>>
>
> The in-vehicle interface is the Ethernet interface of a Router situated in
> the car.  By default, a Router has many and different interfaces. This
> Router (in the car) has an Ethernet interface (in-vehicle) and an
> 802.11-OCB interface.  That OCB interface has an antenna towards the
> outside of the car.
>
> The subnet referred to by this text, is formed by the OCB interfaces (not
> the Ethernet interfaces - 'in-vehicle') of the cars nearby.
> The 'in-vehicle' interface can be Ethernet, Bluetooth or even WiFi (WiFi
> onboard).
>
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> --
>
> Best Regards
>
> Nabil Benamar
> Associate Professor
> Department of Computer Sciences
> School of Technology
> Moulay Ismail University
> Meknes. Morocco
>
>
>

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Best Regards

Nabil Benamar
Associate Professor
Department of Computer Sciences
School of Technology
Moulay Ismail University
Meknes. Morocco

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