Re: AD review: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-chunk-flags-01

Michael Tüxen <Michael.Tuexen@lurchi.franken.de> Thu, 23 September 2010 08:45 UTC

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On Sep 23, 2010, at 10:10 AM, Lars Eggert wrote:

> Summary: ready for IETF last call
> 
> Please fix the nits below in your working copy:
Hi Lars,

fixed in CVS. Will be included in the next revision.
Thanks for reporting them.

Best regards
Michael
> 
> Section 1., paragraph 2:
>>   registry entries for for existing chunk types.  The protocol is not
> 
>  Nit: s/for for/for/
> 
> 
> Section 3.3., paragraph 1:
>>   to use these value to create the new registry.
> 
>  Nit: s/these value/these values/
>